Sunday, July 27, 2008

Remnants




It starts with an anxious scurry of doing.

Front flips marking the first plunge of the summer into a night-lit pool.

Then, days pass ...

Heavy legs and a subdued, fulfilling melancholy.

An inevitable sense of loss .

Strangers are friends.

Remembered, years later, for the part they played in a finite suspension of all that's wrong with life.

It's better that you never asked their name.

6 comments:

Rusty said...

Beautiful.

From what I've ever seen from you, that's the best thing you've ever written.

eric said...

there you are. let me catch you before you disappear.

Tink said...

Beautifully said my friend!

dan said...

That took me back.

Cindy-Lou said...

How depressing.

Rick Rockhill said...

I was lost for a moment while reading that but it made for pleasant thoughts anyway...